Composition Editing Programme
For students to improve their composition writing skills, constant practice is a must. This programme shows students how they can brush up their language and content through editing. Basically, a student submits a piece of composition to us in various editable formats (Whatsapp, MS Word, Email) together with the given instructions (which may include pictures), and we will grade the original piece of composition before proceeding to edit it. We accept handwritten work on a case to case basis depending on the legibility of the student's handwriting. In editing the piece of work, we will try our best to keep to the original intention of the writer, but if we feel that the work is lacking in content, we will add or substitute with suitable content to enhance the composition. After editing is completed, we will Email the edited version with grade for the original piece of work back to the student.
UNEDITED VERSION
It was a sundrenched morning. My family decided to go to Bishan Park for a day of fun. We packed the picnic basket with delicious food, snacks and drinks. We travelled on our car to reach our destination. When we were at the entrance, saw many families were crowded as it was a public holiday. My father found a shade under one of the lush trees. Mother unpacked the picnic basket on the picnic mat. My brother, father and I played a netball with fun and laughter. After one hour, we all felt hungry. Had a delightful lunch and rest for a while with jokes. Then we planned to fly a kite. Our eyes lit up with joy when the kite swayed and soared in the mid-day sky. We were all filled with excitement. Unfortunately, dark clouds and had gathered in the sky. From the distance came the low rumbling of thunder we understood and packed our things and rushed back home before heavy downpour. We had a little bit disappointment but spend quality time together with our family members. Author: Dharyny (P3) Language: 5 / 8 Content: 8 / 12 Total: 13 / 20 |
EDITED VERSION
It was a sun-drenched morning. My family decided to go to Bishan Park for a day of fun. Mother loaded the picnic basket with fizzy drinks and a variety of delicious food which included fried chicken wings and egg sandwiches. We were in high spirits as we set off to our destination by car. When we arrived at the park, I noticed many families there as it was a public holiday. The whole place was bustling with life. Father managed to find a shady spot under a lush tree. Mother spread the picnic mat on the ground before laying out the contents of the picnic basket on it. Father, my brother and I scrambled to an open field nearby to play with our large inflatable ball. We had a great time of fun and laughter as we tossed the ball around. It was not long before we all felt hungry. We had a delightful lunch prepared by Mother before we went on to fly our kites. Our eyes lit up with joy as our kites swayed and soared in the mid-day sky. We were filled with excitement as we competed to see whose kite could go the highest. Unfortunately, dark clouds soon gathered in the sky and the low rumbling of thunder could be heard. Before we could rush back to the picnic spot, it started raining cats and dogs. We hastily packed up our stuff and dashed to a nearby shelter. The miserable weather was a dampener but at least we had some fun before the rain came. Although we were a little disappointed by the weather, I was glad that we could still spend quality time together as a family. - |
Package price (2 compositions x 4 weeks = 8 compositions):
Primary 1 & 2 : $60 (handwritten or editable format)
Primary 3 & 4 : $72 (handwritten or editable format)
Primary 5 & 6 : $88 (handwritten or editable format)
Non-package pricing
Primary 1 & 2 : $8 per composition
Primary 3 & 4 : $10 per composition
Primary 5 & 6 : $12 per composition
To proceed with the registration, please fill in the form below and payment instructions will be emailed to you. If you would like further information about the programme, please contact us and we will attend to your enquiry as soon as possible. Please note that submission of the form below would mean that you have understood the Terms & Conditions.